Raindeer

Upvoted! I think you did a very nice job with your revisions - I like the elaboration on the butterfly.

Thank you so much! I think I agree with all of these points. Thank you for pointing the out~

Thank you so much for the review!

Thank you!

Ah! Thanks so much (:

Hey there! :) Thanks for the review! Mia's actually not in love with him, and neither is Alden in love with her. Maybe in the future but not right now. ...

Sorry for replying so late! Thank you so much for this review - I got a few comments about the school and I'll definitely work on that more in the ...

Ah, i see! That can always be frustrating for the viewer/reader - the whole superhero thing.

Thank you so, so much - this was incredibly helpful!

Thank you! Definitely taking note of the character thing. Also, I can definitely agree to the fact that his powers are verrrryy random xD I'll work on that. Thanks again!

Oh, I see! I could never write those, haha. No problem!

I see! I was assuming she must be hiding something. She's very mysterious. :p No problem!

Thank you. I just found the names online! ^-^

Thank you! :p I actually knew the word auxiliary before and thought it was gorgeous, so I used it for her! I didn't think of Euphonious myself, but I saw ...

Yep, writing late at night can sometimes do that xD Can't wait!