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Her hair looked like warm chocolate and Her caramel-coloured skin was flawless. She'd smile sweetly and her sugar coated words Would make you think there was no one more perfect ...

So true. I like it, I dont think i can fault it in any way :)

it is a little fuzzy, but i like it :D you're really good at drawing XD

This is a wonderful message, and its great that you still have enough faith to be proud of who you are! great job :D

thanks for the comments and advice :D much appreciated yeah, i do normally say thank buddha instead of thank god, and dont usually use capitals in diary writing for some ...

hey, thanks for the comments and advice :D i'll sort out the awkward wording in places, and i do generally say Thank Buddha, instead of Thank God :L i dont ...

dear diary, i've forgotten what it feels like to be warm. not in the emotional sense, as people usually write about, but in reality. after a sixteen kilometre hike (12k ...

thanks so much! *grins*

heeey thanks for the advice, all very good points which i'll take into consideration and probably change some things too:D

This city, it's quite beautiful Sometimes. It's a pool of silvery light, A network of roads, rivers, pulsing veins, A tangled web of intricacies and Soul, Spun from the hearts ...