Young Writers Society

I very much liked this! Nothing to complain about; all in all, I think this is a very gentle piece, and I feel like I can feel the element of ...

I loved this poem with my whole chest. It's a little uncommon to catch me laughing out loud at a piece of writing, but I kept finding myself chuckling at ...

Howdy!! Something I really like about this poem is the descriptiveness of it. I feel like I can perfectly imagine everything being described, and especially in this line: "That even ...

Heyo! First off, I really like how this is structured! It's a welcome change from what I usually see, and it's refreshing. Secondly, I think you did a great job ...

TW Implied Suicide This feels like a very somber piece. I like the subtly in which the topic of suicide was spoken about, because while this a very emotional piece, ...

Heyo! I'm not usually a huge fan of poetry, but the title caught my eye and I'm glad I read it. It reads as very personal, and packs quite an ...

Hey!! I'm back again with another review, lol. The beginning was really well done! I like that you started off with the books; it was specific and vague enough that ...

Hey!! Stopped by to give a review. :) I really thought that this was a really interesting read, especially since it's being told from the perspective of a seven year-old, ...

Hey!! This poem really hit me in a personal place, if for no other reason than because I'm also not cis and it really brought forwards a lot of memories ...

Hey!! I hope my comment here finds you well. :) I'm gonna start off by saying that I really enjoyed your use of the weather to portray tone! At the ...

I really like the comparison you made between onions and the healing process! When I opened this piece I wasn't sure that it would work, but the imagery and the ...

Hey! I hope this comment finds you well. I'm gonna start this by saying that I'm assuming that Ren is nonbinary, which I thought was super cool just because I ...

This flows really well! The way you structured it makes it really easy for the eye to follow, and the rhyme you have going was extremely pleasant. It's a really ...

This is absolutely beautiful! Your choice of vocabulary is really expressive without it coming off like you're trying too hard to be overly metaphorical. The piece flows very well and ...

First off, wow. I hadn't expected that to be as good as it was, in all honesty. Kudos. I really like your vocabulary and the images it put in my ...