RainStormZ

Very well written. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there where you could use some commas, but other than that really good. I love out its not really ...

Wow! Very well done. I love it. Very good descriptions of emotions, it made everything flow neatly together. You did an amazing job with being able to connect with the ...

Wow, very well written. I liked it very much. After reading the first few paragraphs I wasn't sure you were going to link it with your synopsis but well done! ...

I really liked this. As I was reading I wanted to read more about the experience of flying. It was a little too short. You should try exploring taking it ...