RainStormZ

Wow, amazing. The first picture is by far my favorite! Great job! :)

Fading Away You are starting to fade away. Right before my eyes, everything about you is slowly dissolving into a blank portrait of someone who does not exist anymore. As ...

]Hey everyone! Here is the new edited version of my new story! Thanks for all the reviews and help with my grammar mistakes! Grammar is not one of my strong ...

Wow! Very well done. I love it. Very good descriptions of emotions, it made everything flow neatly together. You did an amazing job with being able to connect with the ...

I am very glad that you enjoyed it! :) Thanks so much about the commas, I noticed that this morning when I was proofreading it. I really need to work ...

Thanks so much! I didn't catch those while I was rereading it through for mistakes! Its a good thing, because I am entering this piece into a contest at my ...

It would be interesting to see the little girls first person reaction to the situation. It could be a more intense reading and description than having it in third person? ...

Wow, very well written. I liked it very much. After reading the first few paragraphs I wasn't sure you were going to link it with your synopsis but well done! ...

Hmm I've never heard of it. lol

Hi! Thanks for reviewing! Action scenes are always my lacking scenes. They are the toughest to write for me. I can go back and try to clear it up a ...

Thanks guys! I am working right now on the names. I think I really like Aiden as the main character's name, but all the other names are in the process ...

Wow, this was amazing. You captivated the emotions perfectly and the description of everything was on the point. Very realistic, nothing seemed out of place. Very well written. Good Job! ...

I really liked this. As I was reading I wanted to read more about the experience of flying. It was a little too short. You should try exploring taking it ...

This is the Prologue of my huge work in process Into the Depths of Night It had started off as a fanfiction, what was only based on characters appearances and ...

This is my first post on YWS! This is a start of a new story that I am working on. It does not have a title yet, and this is ...