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Re: Finding Atlantis (Prologue)
The story's pretty interesting so far. I don't have any critique on it ^^; Although you do need a full stop at the end of your very last sentence, but ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: The Assassination: Part 1
Decent beginning, it's got me hooked ^^. Only thing to tell you is that, in the last sentence, you missed out the letter 'e' in 'Alex's'.
Jan 4, 2008