Rafe14

Really nice!!! This poem had me in a trance and i couldnt turn away. You inserted the dialogue in this poem excellently. Well done and really well written. Keep writing ...

I really liked the imagery throughout this poem. you really took the audience through your experience of halloween. Well done.

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...