Rafe14

Really nice!!! This poem had me in a trance and i couldnt turn away. You inserted the dialogue in this poem excellently. Well done and really well written. Keep writing ...

My birthday is on the 14th November. Same as YWS right? If so that is really cool! Hope everyone enjoys themselves this week.

Focused eyes examine every letter on every word Searching for secret messages which lie therein Concentrating so hard that the sentences become blurred And the mystery is forever lost within ...

I've read quite a few of your poems and the first thing i'd like to congratulate you on is that you no longer capitalize every word WHOO well done! I ...

Im going to make this quick. There were a few spelling errors but i wont go into that. I would say the poem throughout was average. Still good but nothing ...

Whoaaa. I must admit that this poem in certain areas was hard to understand but i think that was because of my lack in knowledge so just ignore that. However ...

I really liked the imagery throughout this poem. you really took the audience through your experience of halloween. Well done.

Lovely. This proves that poems don't have to rhyme to engage their readers. I love the fact that the reader thinks your referring to a lover until the final stanza. ...

I'm going to be honest here. There were a few spelling errors which you may need to attend to. I liked the imagery you put in this poem especially when ...

Gather round, listen up and lend me your ears For I speak of a tale, of sadness and tears. This isn't a fairytale, this happened in reality A man tested ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...