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Hi FritzPearly, This is, in my opinion, the best kind of poetry. It's like a slideshow of seemingly unrelated images, a sushi bar of thought. Ha, ha. Thoughts/opinions: She drips ...

Hi Jenthura, I'm impressed with your ending! I like that it's abolute and (even though one can't help but think Crux a likeable guy) just. I think you could do ...

Hello Meep, This is a charming story! It made me chuckle (out loud), and I like your style and voice. I think you did a great job expressing the frustration ...

Hi Butterfinger (my favorite candybar, just btw), First impression: If your poem were a person, they would be solid, honest, and a little in-your-face. The punctuation is a little strange, ...

Hi GoaGreena, This was an engaging poem. I loved the refrain, "But he held my hand close/and I stayed on firm ground./No slipping or falling,/no hell-hounds around." It brought to ...

Hi Alfreto, I like that each of these poems is so different than the one before. Just a few nitpicky things... Child, Why Cry? Dry you r eyes and come ...

Hi Persephoneia, I'll try my best not to ramble but give you my honest thoughts. I hope they will be in some way be helpful to you. This piece really ...