Radid

I have never really read that many love stories and never really wrote one. I will be really thankful for your criticism, no matter how brutal it might be :smt003 ...

She is just a dream I see But she seems so real to me. A melancholy strain she sings, Reminding me of my sins. Things I don't want to see, ...

I can't take it no more. Nothing makes sense to me Anymore. When I stand in front of the mirror, I don't see my reflection. Instead I see a tortured ...

WOW! that was good.you placed the words perfectly.And also good riming. I get the part that you are leaving your mom.But why? You did a very good job.But it confuses ...

It was nice.But you had some flaws as well.you better explain the characters in more detail.What exactly happened.What did they do with the body?Did they just leave it there? I ...

It's quite confusing.I got an idea what the poetry was about in the third stanza. by the way what does 'whispering dark nothings in my ear' mean.Your arrangement of the ...

Cold, I feel so cold. Trapped inside this Icy cold snow. I can see a faint light In front of my eyes. I try to move, but my body doesn't ...

This is great!!Loved the poem a lot.But I am confused about the second stanza.But over all it was brilliant.Best poem I've read so far in YWS.I really liked the third ...

This is great!!Loved the poem a lot.But I am confused about the second stanza.But over all it was brilliant.Best poem I've read so far in YWS.I really liked the third ...

This is really good.Really brings out the love and Passion towards someone.

NICE.Really like it.

I remember those days When we were together. We held our hands and we promised- We will always be together, We will never let go, We will always keep on ...

I walk and I walk, On this endless road. I hear voices in my head, I hear them whisper in my ears, I hear them screaming for help. I can ...