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Re: The Rage (Chapter 1)
Hello! Great story so far. The only minor issue is that you have a lot of dialogue. It got a little confusing trying to figure out who was talking. It ...
Jul 14, 2020
Hello! Great story so far. The only minor issue is that you have a lot of dialogue. It got a little confusing trying to figure out who was talking. It ...
Jul 14, 2020
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