Rachymare

I like it :) Im guessing the spelling mistakes were on purpose? It made it more, young and mystical tbh :) I like how you play it out, and leave ...

I like your story :) This is a good begging, it leaves a lot of wonder, how old is the girl what does she look like, what happened to her ...

I like the plot, I'm young and inexperienced with reviews but I'm attempting :) I do have quite a clear picture of Angus in my head, which is good because ...