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Re: Twins of Volengrad, Ch. 8
Why on Earth haven't I read any of this before? It's Review Day and I've just been clicking through the things with no comments, and I stumbled on this. I'd ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 18)
Yo yo, Skinsface. Go figure. I would completely squander my advantage of reading this the second you posted it by waiting not just a few days but a whole freaking ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2, Elle *Rewritten*
First and perhaps most importantly, I haven't read your first chapter, so whatever follows from here is potentially a result of me not knowing what's happened up to this point. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Die Young
Hi Wranna, So, the little secondary title told me this is set in Medieval times, but I'm a little lost. Is this in England or Italy? Also, (unfortunately for the ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Lady No Soul (1)
Hi Twit! I am so intrigued. Unfortunately, the single thing I'm perhaps most intrigued about is why this (which reads like historical fiction) is in with the fantasy novels. It ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Through The Eyes of a Werewolf- Ch.10
So, I still haven't read all the chapters. I want to so much, but I keep getting distracted. The cool thing is, though, that I've read maybe 4 and 6 ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: I will always love you. *old*
Oh, Kagi, I'm not a romantic person, so requesting me to review a romantic short story is not the... Well, I'm not the best fit for reviewing this sort of ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 17)
Okay, Skinsies. One word. No, two words: good frogs. I clearly haven't read enough of your writing recently, because I am in a semi-state of awe at the moment. Your ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Dark Obsession: Chapter one: COMPLETE
Hey Soulkana. It's been a while since I've reviewed something of yours. :) The bottom line is that a stranger creeping in is always loaded with good potential for a ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (4)
Snoinkus.... je suis... back. Don't know "back" in French yet. Sigh. Anyway, I chowed through the first entries here. Absolutely chowed. Chowed and was relieved that Solea was back in ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (3)
Snoinkers. I am possibly in love. This chapter sold me on the story, for whatever reason. Despite the fact that I know more about what's going on than perhaps anyone ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: The Battle: Prologue
How did I never see this? Definitely not the type of work that should go without comments for this long. Not that any work does, but a coherent prologue? Especially ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Dark Secrets prologue
Hey DarkShadow! Got a few bits of critique for you here. Fortunately, they're pretty easy fixes and come down to two words. First word: paragraphs. Second: punctuation. Right now it's ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Alchemists 3: Alchemist Tricks
Hey Serenity! I'm back again. Sorry it took me so long to get to this! I'm still liking what you have going on here very much. I also like that ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps draft (25/6/11)
Hey Rosey! 'Tas been awhile since I last read Cat Steps and figured there was no time like the present to stop by. I loved the dialogue in this. It ...
Jun 26, 2011
