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I assume this was written primarily for fun for you, so I'm not going to approach it as if it were written with other intentions in store. Other than perhaps ...

Hey, Phoenix. I am here at last. First, I have to echo what the other said and say that this is a very long post. Splitting it up will get ...

What do you get when you get a review from me? A massive text well, usually. Prepare yourself for the most disorganized spew you've ever seen. Well, read. Unfortunately, I ...

It is a draft and if you can offer any advice on punctuation then I would be forever in your debt. You'll have it, my friend! I'm one of those ...

Oh, my. The chemistry between the two is getting slightly scandalous already. Probably because their relationship is just shy of two thousand years old and he has to keep watching ...

Here at last, 97! Sorry it took me so long! I'm wishing now I'd gotten this sooner, because this was so many flavors of wonderful. So far, it seems as ...

I didn't know this was posted. I swear. In the future, notify me. Pwease? First, I agree with Skinny Jeans in the whole. I wasn't sitting here on the edge ...

Hiya! Here as requested. First, got to refute something Stori said. The knowledge that this book held will be forthcoming for my duty. That's a complete sentence, not a fragment. ...

Hi Springs! So, a lot of things are working for this chapter. A lot indeed. For one thing, I appreciate the style and voice with which you write more than ...

Hey Jaymee! I agree with Jelly. You do write description so beautifully, and it did flow so well. Very waltzy. The tone and the pacing was as enchanting as the ...

So, I'm sort of just jumping in on this chapter. Haven't read the previous ones. I followed along really quite well, all things considered. I'm curious as to why Darren ...

This was several shades of horrifying. Good gods . I feel just a tad bit sick physically, and I'm mentally revolted. I believed it, and that was the worst part. ...

Hi, DramaLlamallamallama! The funny thing is, when you linked me up, I'd already had this in my to-review pile. Fate? Maybe. First, I have to say that I disagree with ...

Hmm, me on scripts. Usually I terrorize the prose fiction and make people rue the day they dangled participles. But, sally forth into the unknown I shall. I'll probably just ...

All right, Skinsies. Two things have to come out right out front here. First, I read 19 and went right into 20 because dang it, I wanted to know what ...