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Yo, Skinsy. It's Rach. Not that you could mistake Ribbit for anyone else, right--even from a mile away? Anyway, I'm doing something differently than I usually do. And that is... ...

So, I read this yesterday and thought it was beautiful. I still think it's beautiful and am pretty sure I still will tomorrow. It's a wonderful piece of writing. I ...

Ni! Ni! Ni! I still just can't get over you being Shrubbery. But, oh well. Time for review :D One thing that caught me by surprise here was the originality ...

Hiya, Anger! I'm finally reviewing one of your works. And I think I have three things for you... 1. Differentiate the perspectives You have two first-person perspectives here, from two ...

Hi there! I'm Rach, here to review. I haven't read the other chapters. Your title just caught my attention, and so I figured I'd check it out anyway. That said, ...

Hi Sweeney! I'm Rach, and I'm reviewing today! I like the idea you have here. It's got a different edge to it than I'm used to. And you've also got ...

Hi Evi. First, I have to congratulate you on your spectacular paragraph spacing. It's ingenious. How did you do it? HOW?! ...hehe. Anyway. I love the concept here. Something about ...

As soon as I submit this review here, I'm going to send you a gift. The gift is in recognition of the following achievements: 1. Having a character I was ...

Hi Vstarfirix! I'm back! With a tangerine. You know those cute little ones that peel really easily? Yeah, one of those. It's delicious. But, onto review. I'm still liking your ...

Hi Vstarfirix! Rach here at last. I'll be off to review the next chapters too in a little bit. First, though: your prologue! As you know, my reviews can get ...

Yeessss. First dibs! First dibs! My apologies on not reviewing Chapter Two yet. I think the other reviewers got most of what I wanted to say, and, as I think ...

Hi RangerHawk! I'm eating a stuffed bell pepper and reviewing this for you today! How cool is that?! (Not important, Rach. Not important at all.) Because this is a new ...

Your writing pushes my reviewing skillz to the max. It's simultaneously humbling and thrilling. But, now that I'm here at long last, let's see what I can come up with ...

Hi Yuri! 'Tis Rach, here to review, as requested! I'm not as good with short stories, but I'll give it my best shot. Also, I haven't read any of the ...

Hi PaperbackHeart! I'm Rach and I'm here to review... Your questions first! 1) I'm not entirely sure if I like it yet. I think I'd need to read more to ...