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Re: The YWS 2011 Yearbook
R.W Howdy!!!!!!
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Glorious
Glorious The spring winds blow in swaying the tall grass back and forth. The bright sun shines on my body delivering me warmth in such a dark time. I’ve never ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Hazel
Hazel I didn’t want this moment to end; I can’t stop staring into his eyes for he pulled me in each growing minute we continue to hold our stare. His ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Hazel
Hazel I didn’t want this moment to end; I can’t stop staring into his eyes, he pulls me in each growing minute we continue to hold our stare. His face ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Journal Entry One: Aulani:
Aulani is a Hawaiian name for a girl... It's meaning is the King's Messenger. Aulani is a beautiful name and I feel like I can tie it to the sea.. ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Journal Entry One: Aulani:
Aulani is a Hawaiian name for a girl... It's meaning is the King's Messenger. Aulani is a beautiful name and I feel like I can tie it to the sea.. ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Who stole Peggy?
Well this is quite short! But anyway on with my review! There should be more emotion with this, Losing a dog is tragic, your reader has to be able to ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Lost Light
I like this.... It's a really good start to a story. A Paranormal Fiction kinda thing going on here if you ask me. Without the romance, or maybe that is ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Phantom Two
Chapter One I’ve been having these dreams about darkening skies. About lying in an endless field of grass danger approaching from somewhere beyond the darkness, I can hear the screams ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: The Phantom Two (Rewritten Version)
Chapter One I've been having these dreams about darkening skies. About lying in an endless field of grass danger approaching from somewhere beyond the darkness, I can hear the screams ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Like Wildfire: 1
My review for you and some advice I've learned over a great deal of time. I think this has the potential to become a great story. You just need to ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Undescribable Love (Chapter 0)
Alright time for my review, I thought it was a generally a good story. At first I was a bit confused seeing how we went from somewhere to Christmas and ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: The Phantom Two
The Phantom Two Chapter One The pebbles on the ground fly as I sweep them around with me shoe. It’s late, almost too late for me to be outside sprinting ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: The Phantom Two
The Phantom Two Chapter One The pebbles on the ground fly as I sweep them around with me shoe. It’s late, almost too late for me to be outside sprinting ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Journal Entry Four : Aulani:
The answer to your first question: All part of the Mystery of people my friend :D
Oct 12, 2011