RSwriter3

good subject. i think you might want to improve your line spacing, because that helps with the general rhythm of the poem. awesome other wise. portrays growing up really well, ...

Snuggled in the backseat by the left-hand window Feet tucked under me and eyes half closed, With the open half of my eyes I watch the window. The other occupants ...

this poem seems poorly written, with bad rhymes at first. i couldn't really tell why somebody would bother writing about a boy getting caught by a giant monster. but then ...

very refreshing, enlightening too. you know, i've always had a feeling, and you expressed it sublimely in this poem. i totally agree with you about the essence of mind, heart, ...