RKnight

Ya'll are amazing :) Really.

Why hello there Susie, Welcome, and I hope it's been a warm one. You don't have a lot to be nervous of, everyone here is rather accepting. Hunger Games, you ...

Do you have to be a certain age? and does genre matter? I'm really interested in being published, it's my dream, and I'm just curious.

I'm not sure how i feel about this. I understood the concept, and I see what you were trying to vividly paint in the readers mind. I just wish it'd ...

This wasn't half bad. I was kind of expecting something mushy and just blech, but it was a pleasant surprise. I had a bit of trouble trying to find a ...

Aww, Thank ya'll for commenting/reviewing. I do plan on adding a little more when ever I get the time... So I hope ya'll will read that too!

Chapter one: Fallen Lips parting as a gasp escaped his mouth, his body crumpled with pain while the sword struck his arm. The smell of blood and burnt flesh stung ...

I really like this. A lot. How you began it was great, shugah, very great imagery. The emotion of Alice and of Scott is really real (is that redundant?) and ...

I love this idea for a story. It's so original and yet homey (at least for me). though others corrected your work, I think you might want to think of ...

Hey there! I'm kinda new here as well, my name's RKnight, but ya'll can call me Rayne :) Its pretty helpful and the members are really friendly. If you have ...

It was good- even great, but you were missing some important stuff. I wasn't sure what was actually going on. Maybe start off with a setting somewhere, and introduce the ...

This is a very interesting piece of work. I hope it does end up in a novel for you because the way you start was just... superb. You introduction grabbed ...

Thank ya'll for the welcome! : ) I'm glad someone agrees with me on the war and forbidden love thing, Payne. And Tamara, I love smiles :D they just make ...

Hey, ya'll! I'm RKnight, but for short just call me Rayne :) I'm almost eighteen, and kind of found this site by accident. A good thing. Though, this place seems ...