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Re: Timekeeper- chapter 2.
My day started off well. A sure fire sign it would end badly. Here’s how the story goes. I was walking to the bus stop today with a smile on ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Twilight : The real story
ROFLCOPTER Every Twilight fan needs a sense of humour, this was hilarious.
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Upon Waking
Hello Faia. Love the story, it's increadibly creative. "My head began to spin, my stomach churn again and my heart try to break my ribcage." Part of that sentence doesn't ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Timekeeper
Timekeeper The Dream Aside from the prologue of this story that I posted yesterday, this is my first real try at non-school related writing. I would appreciate lots of feedback, ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read
Well I guess I'm a little late to be commenting... But I just joined today and I love talking about my likes and dislikes to people who aren't listening, so ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: What a Wonderful World
I think a little more detail is in order. I would like to know where abouts he is, what he's in the middle of a fight that night. When you ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Exile - Chapter 1 - Part 1
Luxury window? In my not-at-all-profesional opinion, I think this this is worded a little strangely. I agree with Paul_iii in the first comment that you use a rather lot of ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Timekeeper
Timekeeper Prologue She ran her fingers over the blade in her pocket and stared blankly at the hands of the watch as they ticked away the last moments. Her heart ...
Jul 2, 2009
