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  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic
    Re: White Spaces

    Hello! Quill here with a short review! First Thoughts I LOVE love love this piece The first section immediately drew me in and it just didn't let go The beginning ...

    Jun 1, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: So, "What's love"? ,You asked

    Hey Nini! Quill here for a quick review! So let's get started: first thoughts I love this poem! It makes one think very deeply about the actual effects of love ...

    Mar 14, 2023

  • Poetry » Humor, Health
    Re: gasoline killed me

    Hey Quill here for a quick review! things I loved First off I love the imagery and hidden meaning in this. I love the way that at first it seems ...

    Mar 11, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: No one will know and No one will care

    Hello! Hope you're having a lovely day, night, or whatever time it is for you there right now! Quill here for a short review Let's get started! *Dips quill into ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Dead or Alive

    Helloooo! Hope you are having a lovely day, night, or whatever time of day it is for you! Quill here for a short review! first thoughts Wow, just wow. What ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Woes of an Artist

    Hello! I hope you're having a lovely day or night or whatever time it may be for you! Quill here for a short review! First impressions Wow, I didn't expect ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Angelic Demon:Part Two

    Hello! Quill here to write a short review!! Hope you're having a lovely day or night! first impressions First off: I love you're set up and close up of this ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.2

    Hello! Quill here back for another review! I think I'm going to focus on reactions again but let me know what else you'd like to hear!!! Sunny gasped and swiveled ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Are you happy?

    Hello! Quill here to write a short review! *Takes out inkwell* first thoughts So immediately I am intrigued because this feels sort of like a poem but in prose format, ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Poetry » Review, Literature
    Re: Book thief .

    Hello! Quill here for a quick review! first thoughts , I don't know this book, (although this makes me want to read it) so It's hard to judge the meaning ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: letting you hear

    Wow, this. I felt this. I think especially after my parents divorce it's been hard to have a good conversation with my dad. And BOY did you capture this feeling. ...

    Jan 28, 2023

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Re: Warriors: Oasis

    Hello! Quill here for a short review l! I used to LOVE warriors I was frankly a little obsessed so I was pretty excited to see a fanfic! So let's ...

    Jan 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.1

    Hello! Quill here to write a little review! First off: I LOVE THIS the idea is such a creative take on classic fantasy and the title alone has made me ...

    Jan 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative
    Re: "are we friends?" ... "no."

    Hello! It's quill here to write a review! Sorry if I'm a bit rusty, I haven't reviewed in awhile but this piece really caught my eye. It's amazing the raw ...

    Jan 16, 2023

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: In Times of Crisis (Short Trailer)

    Helloooo, Trinity here for a small review~ This was great! I would be very exited to see more if you decide to write it! (And can find some time haha) ...

    Sep 27, 2022


"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul."
— Pablo Neruda