PurpleEurope

I didn't really read it, but you're my sister and I wanted to tell you about the first day of school. The choir room is different, Mr. VanDyke got a ...

It's a bit long for my taste, but it wasn't boring like most really long ones I read. It was enjoyable, (in a sad way) through the whole thing, and ...

This is amazing! Great job. I especially liked the second stanza. But oh no - what's this? Something's pulling you down To the earth, to the gravel, To the grass, ...

Bethy-I meant that when im THINKING of them its fast, but when im WITH them it's normal, i should have italicized normal, but the other two thought it was fine, ...

Great job Girl!

When I think of you , my heart beats fast, I'm positive our love will last. But even if the last is true, It beats normal when I'm with you ...

I rather like this. The rhyme scheme is wonderful, most of these don't rhyme, so yours is now officially in my good books. Sometimes black, And sometimes white. But always ...

This is exactly how I felt when I joined. It's really brilliant, and I'm not just saying that because I prefer Lyric Poetry:). If I'm right, you can let all ...

@PurpleEurope thinks that was wicked! Totally beasty. Make some more! Katie out #azkaban style

This is really nice:) It reminds me wonderfully of my darling little child hood. And I'm still a 13 year old! I liked the first line, A brightened ship in ...

Review:) Love. The way everything was that night so perfectly was it all set up. But you no longer think of the way the rose was in my hair, Is ...

Woah.

This is kind of nice, but I don't quite understand it. The rhyme scheme is okay, but I still don't get it. Who are John Jane and Em? What does ...

Wow. You are really good! We did the magazine thing in art class, and I couldn't tell that it was half and half until I read the comment! It's really ...

This is a really interesting piece of work. It's very descriptive with out being obvious, and the vocabulary is absolutely fantastic. I can't think of the word I'm looking for, ...