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Re: Death's Door
I'm really relieved someone agreed haha
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Re: Eyes of Hooks
I'm tired so I just copied my comment: That stanza was in correlation with fake glass made out of sugar that's made to be broken in movies. But also a ...
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Re: Mom
It's not that I don't love her, it's that if it was a healthy relationship I wouldn't be anticipating on the day I can finally escape my parents. It's okay ...
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Re: (late) Valentine's day poem
It's not about needing someone to make me happy, in fact I think I function better alone. It's about seeing everyone around me being so happy and in love. And ...
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Re: Little Boat
It was about their relationship, yes. And wow when you said mistake in punctuation I was super confused and then you said I forgot a dot and I was like ...
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Re: Mom
The thing is, even after reading this, people still want to tell me how much I should appreciate her. I don't mean to be rude, but you really don't know ...
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Re: Death's Door
Haha! I'll make sure to call him Indigo from now on! And I'll probably change it to past tense but oh my gosh thank you for not trashing the personification ...
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Re: Something a father shouldn't do
It is my story and I'm sorry you can relate. If you ever need to talk just pm me
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Re: Perfection
I think I actually have 2 other positive poems but you're right this one is kind of number 1 in that category haha! You're actually reviewed the others of mine ...
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Re: Tile
That line is supposed to stick with you as if this person's life was actually ruined. Sorry if you don't like it but it's meant to be there! And I ...
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Re: The Ocean
Good guess actually! And I see where you're coming from but I think including the "and" in the fourth line helps with a sort of cause and effect type of ...
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Re: My house
Thanks! I'll change it to stay actually that sounds better
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Re: Centimeters
Oh yeah that sucks darn technology. But if you ever decide to continue this I would love to hear it!
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Re: Eyes of Hooks
That stanza was in correlation with fake glass made out of sugar that's made to be broken in movies. But also a metaphor for my own being. Sometimes I'm that ...
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Re: Death's Door
This is not about he and I so just about every question here won't be answered. Death's Door was personified because its representing suicide and depression and that can take ...
Mar 30, 2014
