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For some reason the system doesn't like when I try to press enter and make stanzas, but that is that I intended. No, that statement was definitely not a question. ...

Please don't tell me what parents are trying to do if you don't know mine. Thanks. And the lily pad is a metaphor for me and the ugly toad is ...

I think the winter sentence should stay how it is but I'm going to fix the other things you suggested. Thanks for reviewing!

I have read it aloud and liked how it sounded and since this is about emotions it doesn't always have to have imagery. I usually avoid punctuation, but I added ...

This isn't about an envious friendship and when I tried to make stanzas when originally publishing but it wouldn't let me.

I'm sorry you didn't find it interesting, but I don't really agree with the sentence revision. It gives a different tone to the scene, accentuating the date and "accompanied" sounds ...

Okay well firstly, movie theaters are very loud and there's no denying of that haha. I personally get headaches during things where it's loud and I have to wear 3D ...

You didn't waste my time, haha! Thank you so much :)

This one actually flowed pretty naturally for me and I wasn't desperately trying to stay in the rhyme scheme. And this didn't seem very cliche to me, in fact it's ...

Thanks! :) And I can see how that line seems awkward but I don't know if changing it to 'by" would help. The line about a romantic tragedy that never ...

Head seems pretty clear to me

I fixed the whole whoops typo. And the third and fourth lines applied to my specific situation where the other person got to somehow decide everything for the both of ...

Oh okay sorry :)

Thank you so much! Haha :D

Yeah it is and thanks!