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Re: BDSM.
A) What I think about it. B) No. Fantasy has no place in the real world. C) Yes.
Feb 23, 2013 -
Re: the other kind of love
sharp kisses of steel wire against flesh metal burning the wrists cold the iron will of the ropes and the mounting anguish of every joint and as the fire roars ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Little Lucifer
Sierra. This was a strange poem. Selling one's soul to the devil is an old concept, but it can be definitely traced to the legend of Faust. Faust is a ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Miserable
Qoh16. "Strife" and "life" are painful rhymes. It seems as if you used the word "strife" only to make it rhyme with "life". If that is the case, why rhyme ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: I believed in fairies.
wewinwelose. This was a sad poem. It was mainly sad because of the line about love. But do you not realize that when most people grow up, they find love ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: My Name
Sannah. This was an interesting poem. It was unusual, and it gives a good sense of how you feel about your name. Why do you capitalize every beginning line? Is ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: I Forget My Age.
KatTrain. This poem is sad. Does the poem imply that when she is seventeen, the narrator will kill herself? But I liked "grotesque waistline of 5." Why is there a ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: When no-one is around
Sometimes, when no-one is around, I dream of lying in a pool of blood -- not just any, mind you, no, the hand that drew the blood would surely be ...
May 25, 2011