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Re: I hope things never change
I think everyone has pointed out the errors that I was going to point out but I just want to say that sometimes, one word is all it takes to ...
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Re: Spiridon (Chapter 1)
Hi Mo ^^ Thanks for your critique. Usually, I'm not too good with it but that seemed both sensitive and helpful ^^ I realised a few of the mistakes and ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Spiridon (Chapter 1)
Hello all! ^^ This is a story I'm working on. It's inspiration came from Pokemon/Digimon/Whatever battle world is popular now but I'd tried to make it as different as possible. ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: It's a spoon's life, really.
I will never be able to look at a spoon the same way again. I absolutely adore the personification in this piece. Usually, with inanimate objects, it can be pretty ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: The Silhouette
Sometimes a piece can be so descriptive, it overdoes itself. I would like to say that this piece is not once of them. Beautiful description, and a piece that catches ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Why hello there!
Answered in a PM since this was turning into "Ask Pugseli anything" XD
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Why hello there!
Well in terms of books, I'm open to anything really. And I never turn my back on anything without at least attempting to read it first. It happened with Twilight ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: No title (suggestions welcome)
Well it seems aspiringyoungwriter managed to point out the minor problems within this, and I beieve it's right to point out mistakes. But I want to say, please do keep ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Why hello there!
Hi there YWS! My name is Pugseli and I'm from England, UK. I come here with a few story concepts to share and I hope to improve as a writer. ...
Nov 8, 2009
