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Hey Moo!:D This was a very interesting start to your story. I liked the use of short paragraphs and the language used throughout. I have to agree with the other ...

A/N: This is a story I recently started writing and have been convinced to post by a friend. I just want to thank the friends of mine who helped me; ...

Hey Moo!:D What happened?!?! :shock: Seriously, I must know now! I liked this, although I felt it was a little bit short. I would like to know more about the ...

Hey there Moo!:D I am really enjoying how this story is developing! The relationship between the two main characters is intriguing, and I want to see more between them as ...

Hey there! :D Well, after receiving your PM, I decided to take a loot at your story. :D This was brilliant! I was on the edge of my seat the ...

This chapter was not too short! I think it was the right length for this part of the story. There was great character development in this chapter, and is it ...

I thought that this poem was great! I cannot imagine how hard it must be living with Tourette's, but this poem gives a wonderful bitter-sweet insight into the thoughts of ...

Hello there!:D Wow, this really caught be by surprise! I, like everyone else, thought it was a human at first, however I loved the twist at the end! This poem ...

Hey there!:D Another great chapter, Moo! Nothing really stood out here, although a few things confused me slightly. You say that Chris and April are in most classes together, except ...

Wow! This story is truly breathtaking! I really enjoy the relationship between Chris and April! They seem like they would go well together :wink: I noticed a few minor errors ...

Thank you all for taking time to review my poem; I really appreciate it! Juniordame and niteowl, I agree, it does sound better without the second "I". Thank you for ...

Hey Moo! This is truly a great piece of writing! I love the build up of tension throughout the story; it makes the reader wish to read on! The only ...

Shattered Shattered like the pieces of broken glass Accidentally smashed on the wooden floor. Shattered like the pieces of my heart, When you say you won’t see me anymore. Was ...

This was great! It was very interesting and flows very nicely, and I can't see anything wrong with it! Keep this up, I would love to read more from you!:D ...

Greetings Whisper! This is an excellent piece of writing! I do think however that in the sentence: "he’d and spent the day", that the 'and' should not be there. Also, ...