Prosithion

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don't write one. You don't need a love scene to keep the story flowing. If anything, they disrupt the order of the story. They don't add anything.

It seems like a worthy pursuit, but I like to be. It is VERY useful. I think I'll stick with it, though E-prime would be good in certain occasions

Well, the thing is, i think that I write better freeflow. It lets me get my ideas out. Plans don't let your imagination fly

Help me people! I don't know if this sentence is awkward or not, and it's driving me crazy! What's wrong with it??????????? "Small peridot butterflies were woven in her blonde ...

well, this is a dilemna. I don't really think that there is any way for the rich guy to totally mend the rift, because he's insulted Sam's pride. Then again, ...

well, if you slash their throught with a knife, they die pretty quick, or so I'm told, but then again, it's supposedly VERY messy. A chest wound is better, but ...

Well, if I don't kill off characters, the story juast drags,a nd becomes very boring. In this one story, my MC has to go into the afterlife to get his ...

Fragments are BAD!!!!! They are very grammatically incorrect, and they make a story seem choppy. No fragments. I'll have to light candles and pray to the gods for forgiveness for ...

I comiserate Jack, I have very simplistic plots too. It sucks, but I think if you make a whole bunch of story lines in one story, it makes it seem ...

I agree with Galatea. The chinese would have used Junks, large sailboats with big canvas sails. They wouldn't use sundails, because it's cloudy there a lot. Encarta should have info ...

I have a tendancy on my stories to kill off the main characters. This is a great way to end a story, but I have fallen into that rut. Is ...