Prosithion

First off, I noticed that in the middle of the poem, you split a sentence up between stanzas. I must say that this makes for hard reading. Other then some ...

Often times in Sci-fi stories and novels, authors tend to use multiple stars about which planets will orbit. This is actually an impossibility. The gravity of twin suns would tear ...

Uh, first off, please get rid of the poll. I hate nothing more then a piece of literature, or poetry with a poll before it. This would work better, I ...

I must say, a well written and thought out poem. In a few areas, there seemed to be some rhythm issues, but those were far and few between. If you ...

Kristos Voskres means, "He is risen (Jesus)" Voestenos Voskres means, "Indeed he is risen."

Happy Easter to all of you! KRISTOS VOSKRES! (You're supposed to say back, "Voestenos Voskres.") -Pros

I don't usually, but there are plenty of great quotes I have if I wanted to. In fact, I may, on The Cossack's Ride. I have the perfect quote. "If ...

I suggest The Possessed , by Dosteovsky. A brilliant book. (be prepared for verbosity beyond your wildest dreams. But it's a very good book none the less.) -Pros

Delightful poem. Not many people capitalize the beginning of every line, but I'm glad you did. I felt that although the rhyming seemed a bit forced in places, you kept ...

It's actually very interesting. When I first looked at it, I thought, "Uhoh, another short, short poem." However, when I read it, I actually like it, a lot. It's humorous, ...

Jabber, you are completely correct. I am in total agreement

I changed my username from Ivan Gregoryavich Polenin back to Prosithion.

I don't know... I can't change it yet. I hope I don't miss it.

Erlkoning- Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

4/10... eh, alright...