Prosithion

I have never listened to TOOL in my life, so yes, I have no idea what you're talking about. But It seems good so I don't have to comment on ...

It was good, but I think you have to work more on the rhythm and the rhyme scheme. The wording didn't seem to make a lot of sense. That is ...

I thought that that was very good. However, I'd have to agree with everything that McPheever said. Those little details can really change a story. :smt031

What on Earth was that? It definitely wasn't poetry. I'd have to agree with Inertia. There are major issues with this poem. I't take it back to the writing desk ...

It was late into the night and the scientists were exhausted. They had spent hours typing the rules of nature and natural laws. Now, after almost five years, the work ...

Thanks a lot for the imput. I'll look into it and fix up those mistakes you mentioned. :D

Guys, I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about so enlighten me please. :?

I liked it. Personally, I like Yes and Genesis, but everyone's entitled to their own opinion. :D Megan. You've actually read The Hobbit. Cool. :)

I think that that was a wonderful screenplay and you should go ahead with it. There are people looking for stuff like that. I have only one question. Why do ...

I thought that that was a wonderful story. I particularly liked the description which helped me to picture exactly what was going on. Wonderful job. :thumb:

Birds in the night, Their cries of fright, Make a camper wonder What on Earth could make them sound Like clouds of frightening thunder. He stands up from the forest ...

I thought it was good. :D

Thanks for the imput. :D

It was good. "A deafening silence" is actually very good. I think that there were some rythem problems, but other than that, I thought that it was very good. :D

It was good, but you have to do a lot of proofreading. I think it has the possibility to become a really good story. However, I think there should be ...