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Prosithion

  • Other Poetry Re: Haiku

    I have to agree with all of the above. I don't particularly like haikus, but that was one of the better ones that I have read. :D

    Apr 27, 2006
  • Scripts Re: Miss E goes down under

    Oh my God. What was going on. I don't understand what happened at all. This script you're going to have to explain, because I didn't get it at all. :?: ...

    Apr 27, 2006
  • Other Re: READ THIS

    Ok, Reicheiu, I'm sorry. This spat is getting us nowhere, and its bad to have enemies, so lets drop the whole thing.

    Apr 27, 2006
  • Other Re: READ THIS

    Ok, Reicheiu, What do you suppose that I meant when I said [quote]In the eyes of the pop culture[quote]. I'm saying that Popular culture makes people think in weird ways. ...

    Apr 27, 2006
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Acid Rane

    It was early July and the buildings in Rane were covered in the moisture of those hot, muggy, summer days. Rane was a beautiful city, its spires and skyscrapers glinted ...

    Apr 26, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My father's leave (revision)

    I thought that was very good. You got your point across and did it in a very neat way. I congratulate you and think that was a wonderful poem. Great ...

    Apr 26, 2006
  • Scripts Re: New Play (Play Number 2) Unlimited Rule

    Sorry to say it, but your play was very confusing. The lights up and down and the constant seat change made the story hard to follow. You might want to ...

    Apr 26, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Lone Sailor's Monologue

    I liked it. You got the scotish accent accross very well. It makes me want to find out what happens. I don't really have anything to critique

    Apr 26, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Scarecrow Incident /P

    I thought that this was good. It seems as if you were trying to get across something that happened to you. Whatever it was, I think that it was a ...

    Apr 26, 2006
  • Other Re: READ THIS

    READ THIS. THIS IS IMPORTANT. For all of you who read Dream Deep's Pop Culture essay should read this. For those of you who didn't comment on Pop Culture , ...

    Apr 26, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Nothing but a Name

    I liked your poem a lot, but there were a few problems. The rythm was a little choppy and didn't flow. Your rhymes were good, but the beat was off ...

    Apr 24, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: easter

    I liked it a lot, but i'm not sure you meant what I think you meant. Happy After Easter. :D

    Apr 23, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: accoustic heart

    I have no idea what you just wrote. It sounded nice, but I didn't understand a word of it. :D

    Apr 23, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Morbid Insulation

    What on Earth are you talking about. I have no idea what I just read. You might want to explain it at the end of the story? Poem? Thing. :?:

    Apr 23, 2006
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Spin Real Fast -- Chapter Two

    I thought that it was good, but you don't like men much do you? I would assume that this is a fantasy story because of all the weird names the ...

    Apr 23, 2006


It is a happiness to wonder; it is a happiness to dream.
— Edgar Allan Poe