Prosithion

I thought that the poem was good, but there didn't seem to be a rhyme scheme at all. It also is kind of a topic that's been done to death. ...

no offense, but it isn';t the best poetry in the world. I've read a lot better. I'm not really sure if you're being sarcastic, but I think there is a ...

uh... it was very very good, but I have a question. Did you write it? If so, very good. I liked the feeling it got across and I like how ...

5/10 sort of boring

WOW!!!!!! I've tried sucking my parents into letting me get a samurai sword, but they won't let me. It's awesome that you collect knives. ^_^

key

fixed it ^_~

This was a wondeful book by Leo Tolstoy. It was a long and verbose read, but was very well written and had wonderful character development. Read it. it's really good.

AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!! Snoink, I thought that you were scary before, now my fear is verified. It was unique, bit over the top unique. o.O

Sharty, I think maybe poetry isn't your thing. This poem is sort of disturbing. what's with the dodododododo?

I agree with Dave. I think that this would sound really cool put to music, but try making it flow more. It's really cool that you decided to do lyrics. ...

ahhh... thanks Imp, good crit^_^ I'll look into the stuff you said. I don't have time right now ^_~

uh... nate? What was the point of this'ere poll?

pineapples

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