Prosithion

Yes, it was a very good book. Very Descriptive.

I agree with Galatea. The chinese would have used Junks, large sailboats with big canvas sails. They wouldn't use sundails, because it's cloudy there a lot. Encarta should have info ...

Well, being Poland in the early 1940's, it would have been during WWII. There Nazi's would have occupied, Poland and the Jew's would be all in Ghetto's. US would or ...

what does that have to do with gambling? Otherwise, very good. Why Paris?

YEA!!!! Some one who rhymes!!!!!!!! That was very well done. Very descriptive, and very neat rythem. Wonderful poem. I want more!

as Sohini said, very thoughtful. I'm not sure what you wre trying to get across. Maybe make it a bit more clear. ^_^

This is an unusually soft peice. It isn't as blatent as some, but it is very good, and was very well written. I want to read more.

This was very well done Jiggity. I have only one complaint. there doesn't seem to be any recognizable rythem. It may just be me, but I think a little fiddling ...

Thanks FS. hope you liked the story

I agree with Imp, though this was really well written. I liked the rhyming and I feel that this is the sort of poem I'd write. I like that you ...

I very much agree with Blue Haze. KEEP writing. You have a lot of talent and potential. I'll ber sure to watch your work closely and crit it, because I ...

VERY wordy. I think you could have gotten the point across with less words, althought they really painted a picture. The lines were very irregular, and I think it could ...

Very well done, but I think it didn't follow the title. Well written and good regularity with the lines.

Great poem. I think it was well written, but myabe try making the lines a bit more regular. Good title and good poem. It really gets across the picture.

uh... Well, I'm not a big fan of poems about sex, but I think it was written well. I think the title was a good one, but I think maybe ...