Prosithion

It seems like a worthy pursuit, but I like to be. It is VERY useful. I think I'll stick with it, though E-prime would be good in certain occasions

Well, the thing is, i think that I write better freeflow. It lets me get my ideas out. Plans don't let your imagination fly

Help me people! I don't know if this sentence is awkward or not, and it's driving me crazy! What's wrong with it??????????? "Small peridot butterflies were woven in her blonde ...

well, this is a dilemna. I don't really think that there is any way for the rich guy to totally mend the rift, because he's insulted Sam's pride. Then again, ...

well, if you slash their throught with a knife, they die pretty quick, or so I'm told, but then again, it's supposedly VERY messy. A chest wound is better, but ...

Well, if I don't kill off characters, the story juast drags,a nd becomes very boring. In this one story, my MC has to go into the afterlife to get his ...

Fragments are BAD!!!!! They are very grammatically incorrect, and they make a story seem choppy. No fragments. I'll have to light candles and pray to the gods for forgiveness for ...

I comiserate Jack, I have very simplistic plots too. It sucks, but I think if you make a whole bunch of story lines in one story, it makes it seem ...

well said, Imp

This question is different for every person. You can't aske what is our purpose. You can only ask, what is MY purpose. Sorry if I'm no help, but our purpose ...

I don't believe that I've ever heard of him. how is his writing?

oh, LOTR DEfinitely. HP was as lame as they come, but LOTR was Epic.

IT WAS TERRIBLE. There was no real plot, and Vitoria disproved Einstein's Theory with a can of tuna fish. Come on. It was a very lame book.

Did anyone here read the Silmarillion. If so, how was it?

I do not like CD. I read the first half of A Tale of Two Cities, and had to put it down. It was terrible. I've also read David Copperfield. ...