Prosithion

In short, this has the potential to be brilliant. Now, I love reading sci-fi that makes scientific sense. I mean, I'm no rocket scientist, but I like your science. It ...

First off, I liked it. It has some pretty ingenious rhymes in it. Couple quibbles though. Your lack of punctuation was already addressed, so I'll skip it, other then pointing ...

dude, awesome crit! *bows* Thank you so much.

Could you please review a scene or two from my novella? It would be much appreciated.

thanks a ton for the crit. To answer your quandary, Abney becomes very important later on. You are right, however. It does seem like a lot of unnecessary info. As ...

Overall, I would say that this is a good story, and I like the twist. However, one thing really jumped out at me. If this is a funeral for her ...

I found this poem interesting, but I think that it needs some work. It seems to just wander aimlessly. Maybe try and regiment it a little more. The randomness of ...

Hmm, I liked this poem a lot. It seemed to flow well. It's a little depressing, but that's ok. I don't really have any complaints, which is rare for me. ...

Hmm, I love all things zombie, and this shows potential, but I wanted to point out a few things that I noticed. “I am infected,” the woman whispered, her hand ...

Hmm, while I found the idea interesting, I'd have to agree with the other comments. I'll point out some things I noticed. The green creatures, both mobile and immobile, fed ...

The sky was grey, when the sun rose palely over the towering conifers. It was still cold, but the snow had stopped for the moment, allowing Sergeant Lee to wade ...

Thanks for the Crit. I'll update it when I can. I might post scene 2 tonight or maybe tomorrow morning. Thanks again, Pros

Snow was falling gently in the pine forests of southwestern Canada, slowly coating every rock and plant with a fine patina of white. A deer grazed languidly in a clearing, ...

hmmm, I like the premise. I'm intrigued as to what happens next, and also, what happened before. A couple of quibbles though. "Captain Gregory Tailgunner," said the vultrino that brought ...

It would help if you have seen the TV show, but it if you haven't, it would be a good idea to at least watch a couple of episodes. If ...