Prosithion

*Searin stands up and hits Shan over the head, making the shot go wide. She takes Ralian's arm and hauls him out of the room, without answering the quesstion. Ralain ...

*Ralian cuts off Livny's arm, falls to the floor and takes up residence behind the settee. He pulls out his bow and arrows, and starts shooting at Shan.* very little. ...

*sighs* yes, I can see the stars -Searin In your dreams! -Ralian *goes into bullet time, dodges the bullet, and pulls out his sword. He yells, then lunges for Shan, ...

not bad... sort of tired -Searin with my hands, moron. -Ralian *pulls out knife, but gets a dark brooding look from Searin, and puts it back, instead, taking off his ...

My living room -Searin My"den" *flips Livny off* -Ralian do you enjoy hard work... or in Livny's case, hard Liquer?

no, not really - Searin yeah, right... no, I can't sing. - Ralian Is it raining where you are?

thank you, I'm working on the ending rihgt now, as we speak... well, write.

HAHA! Ok Go. They're awesome! That is just hilarious

THANK YOU VERY MUCH! I thank all of you for the wonderful crits you've given me

Snionk, And next... gah. We get the point. We don't need ten paragraphs all about his routine. We, as the smart readers, get it. He's lonely and he has a ...

um, might be my mistake here, but as I understand it a corporal is an NCO--a non-commissioned officer, and a lieutenatn is an officer, and it is rather...erm, difficult for ...

It was good, but RHYME SCHEME! FOLLOW A BEAT!!! It is choppy without a beat to follow. Lose the Ja and the nein . It doesn't work. Just use yes ...

You're a really good artist, Myth

It doesn't matter anyway. The only way that NK could attack us is with an ICBM. They don't have one, unless they get an old Soviet one. Howver, they do ...

unfortunately, it doesn't say much for Russia, huh? Pity, it might put a damper on our trip.