Prosithion

It was sort of short, but I liked it. If I were you, I'd add on to this poem and expound on uit, because from what I read, it was ...

It was a nice poem, but the stanzas and lines were LLLOOOOONNNNNGGGGGG!!!!!!!! Try shortening them down a little. I think that it will make the poem flow better, but regardless, ...

Kay, you are a born poet. That was wonderful. There was an obvious rhyme scheme and I liked the beat that you followed. Some of the lines seemed too short ...

I liked this one a lot, although it seemed void of rhythym and rhyme (sorry for the spellings). It seemed sort of unweildy, but the effect that it got across ...

I really liked it. The only complaint that I have is that the beat seemed a little clumsy. Even without a coherent rhyme scheme, I found the poem intriguing and ...

Greetings. Welcome to YWS. If you need any help, feel free to PM me. -Pros

The story was very good, but I think you should pick some simpler names. Reader hate nothing else, but for names they can't pronounce. I'll admit, I have the same ...

There were a few gramaticla errors in this story, but I can ignore them for the quality of this psice. Although it appears very anarchist, it was very well written ...

Merci, both of you. Imp, This is my novella, so there will be much more, so you might get a batter feel of the story once I post more. In ...

Scene 1 The 21st of October was always a hectic day. It was the day that the Premier toured the building and Albrecht Hearst was determined to make a good ...

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It was the sixth of June that fateful day, The sky was dark across from the UK. The Allies attacked, the Nazi’s faltered, In their trenches, the Nazi’s cowered. The ...

*not exact translations; I am unable to transliterate the foreign alphabets. It was Halloween when the war started. I was sitting in my room, its grey walls, bed posts and ...

I have been in there for countless years, My mind has been going as if with gears. Countless nights I’ve lain awake, My mind trying to formulate an escape. Seasons ...

prog rock (Yes & Genesis) & industrial metal (Rammstein)