Prosithion

I say that I'd have to agree with Phorcys. work a little on this and it could be really good. Make it longer. If it doesn't work mas a quatrain, ...

Interesting, but it isn't a poem. Other than changing the format, I think that this is a good poem, although I think it could have been a little longer.

It was very good, but around the middle it seemed to lose some of its rhythm. Fix that and I think that this is a wonderful poem.

“Who is to say? For every action there is an equal but opposite reaction. For everything good there is a dark counterpart. It is the only way to maintain balance,” ...

Back when I was teaching at Harvard, I came across a young student, who was studying for his law degree. He came up to me one day, after class, his ...

I was completely captivated, like a deer in the headlights, my eyes never leaving the big, ugly, hairy spider that was sitting before me. It was my sister’s pet tarantula. ...

I got The Prince of Persia for Pc, and the game pads to run it. IT IS AWESOME!!!!!

Ok, Incan. I'm disapointed. You are well known on this site for being the God of the Poetry Forums, then you come up with something like this. If you're going ...

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8/10 I like dragons 7/10 Um, it's okay. Not very appealing, though. What is it from? I got it off an avatar site. It's a picture of a SEAL. I ...

10/10 Very religious. It has a good point

7/10- odd, in a good way.

^5/10 interesting, but sort of drab

Scene 2: Upon arriving at his house, Albrecht stopped at his mailbox before turning into his driveway. There were two letters in the box, along with a magazine. Albrecht pulled ...

Actually, this was it I never thought about changing it, or adding on to it