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Hey, I was wondering if you could critique a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation'. I would suggest scene 1, but I'll leave that up to you. ...

Hey, I was wondering if you could critique a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation'. I would suggest scene 1, but I'll leave that up to you. ...

Could you please review a scene from my novella 'In Defense of Our Nation)? I'd suggest scene 1, but I'll leave it up to you.

or the longest time, I just sat down with a pen and paper, and started writing, and let it go where it wanted to, but as of yet, I've never ...

It depends, but most of the time, I have some Tom Petty or Yes on. Yes tends to do longer (20+ minutes) songs, and it helps get the creative juices ...

Dawn of light lying between a silence and sold sources Chased amid fusions of wonder, in moments hardly seen forgotten, Colored in pastures of chance dancing leaves cast spells of ...

Thanks for the crit. On the matter of salutations in the military, I was in the Coast Guard, and we were either required to call our superior NCO's either 'sir', ...

I mostly listen to progressive rock, but I also listen to metal and pop. Mostly foreign.

Hey Jack. I'm working on a new speculative science fiction novella, In Defense of Our Nation, and I was wondering i you would honor me with a critique or two. ...

Here's scene three as promised. I'll try to finish scene four as soon as possible. Lee was brought to full consciousness, by the rough shaking of his shoulder. He opened ...

I absolutely loved the description. It was expansive and it let you see exactly what was going on. Maybe, instead of just telling what happened, this would be the perfect ...

Grammatically, I can't find anything wrong with it, but I don't really like it. The fractured set up makes it just hard to read. I couldn't really get into the ...

At first glance, this seemed like a pretty daunting read, but once I started,I couldn't stop. This was very well written. I especially like the first person perspective. It really ...

6/10 it's a little hard to make out what it is.

well, everyone else gave you a lengthy critique, so I'll keep mine short and sweet. Yea Zombies! I like zombie stories, and this one did not disappoint. However, one thing ...