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Prosithion

  • Writing Tips Re: Paragraphs

    Use different paragraphs any time you change idea, point of view, split up dialouge, etc.

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pericles and the Minotaur

    It was late one fine clear August day, When Pericles ended his hawking foray. His troop of twenty dismounted that day, In front of the pillars where the kings of ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Dreams fulfilled

    What is this? 'cause it sure isn't a haiku, and it is a very very short poem. I'd add on to this if I were you.

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: 'Send' or 'send'?

    I think it really doesn't matter. Use whatever is easiest. I don't think that anyone is going to lookt hat closely.

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: To outline or not to outline?

    Never never never never never outline!!!!!!!!!! If you do, then you'll be compelled to follow that outline specifically and your story won't have the room it needs to develop and ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: I want advice to start writing well before it's too late!

    I suggest reading a lot! After a while, you get an idea of what's good writing and what isn't. Then, you can take what you've gleaned from these books and ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Um... (peeking over shoulder)

    just quick write down the premise and idea of your thought, then late, when you have little time, write little snippets of it. Then, after everything is finished and you ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Multiple POV

    Stay in the same POV. Otherwise, it gest too confusing and the reader ends up going back rereading a part to find out how they missed the POv change. ALWAYS ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Time intervals!

    End one chapter, and throughout the next, give hints that ten years have passed, but don't come right out and say it. Write the part so that the reader concludes ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Balance

    Meaning is hard to figure. It sometimes is a good thing, because it adds intrigue to your story, but other times, it detracts, by the blatentcy of it. I say, ...

    Apr 1, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate avatars!!!!

    8/10 Intersting. (Wiggy, no it isn't me in the avvie. It's what I think Albrecht looks like. I found it off a website.)

    Mar 30, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    ^9/10 haha Relativity. (Shadow Sun: When you're travelling the speed of light, a flashlight's light is travelling still at light speed in relation to you. Because... time stops at light ...

    Mar 29, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate avatars!!!!

    7/10 interesting, and very detailed. A bit too detailed for an avatar.

    Mar 29, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I'm Free

    I have been in there for countless years, My mind has been going as if with gears. Countless nights I’ve lain awake, My mind trying to formulate an escape. Seasons ...

    Mar 29, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Haunted House

    Sometimes, you do unexplainable things. That’s the excuse I give for why I actually went to the haunted house invitation. The house stood on a lonely hill, its gaze looking ...

    Mar 29, 2007


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