Prosithion

What a jerk! He deserves to get caught, but unique disguise

6/10 blood rushing to the head, meh

8/10 majic, cant beat it

ok, this was a bit confusing. You have it jumping from one character to the next, but good description. I felt, sort of like I was jumping into this midway ...

6/10 Black white, and red. The red brings out the rest of the picture

HAHA!! What an IDIOT! hahahahaha

9/10 Very deep and insightful

6/10 works only with your signature

First story I ever wrote was... 8-9 years ago. It was shallow, and lame, and pathetic.

8/10 So true...

The second one was the coolest Lots of flowers. Possibly lots of allergies

I saw both of them on Messenger. Neat neat! Ameteur photography is pretty cool. (I wouldn't know) ^_~ -Pros

O_O How can you live in your house! They're scary as hell! Number 3 is the most terrifing. I cant tell what she's thinking. *Runs Screaming from thread* I was ...

Good poem, but please get rid of the indents and italics. They really screwed up the flow of the poem. Interesting idea, and rather deep and insightful, if you ask ...

uh... this doesn't strike me as poetry, of any kind, sorry. but, you deserve a crit anyway. ^_^ Same bat time, same Bat channel I think that this is supposed ...