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Prosithion

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: (Not) My Music

    I must say, a beautiful poem. Simple, yet moving. Exemplary. Fluent Sliding melody Bellows thought through Sweet vibration Coerced by finger, Thumb and bow. Resonate, fine 'cello, With my passion ...

    Jul 18, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Alike

    I thought that this poem was rather lacking, sorry. It seemed to meander and I never really got the point of the poem. It wasn't bad, just it didn't make ...

    Jul 18, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: The Weeping Willow

    If I'm correct, a haiku is... 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, then five syllables. so, just cause it has 17 syllables doesnt necessarily make it a haiku. As mentioned before, ...

    Jul 18, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Moment of Healing

    Interesting poem, although, admittedly, not one of my favorites. The rhythym seemed ackward through parts of it, and the irregular stanzas made the poem look odd and unweildy. The air ...

    Jul 18, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Portfolios/Post Since Last Visit/Recent Lit Additions

    oh, but still, kudos to you, for continually battling with the errors

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Darkness(Day1)

    O.O I wouldn't classify this as poetry! Rather disappointing. It's too short to even give a critique. Please add to it, or something, and put it in stanza form. Best ...

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Memoir of a Mormon [McHasting’s Golden Arches]

    Cannibalism. oy, you and Claudette. ^_^ Smacking lips, cracking hips Percussions from the side. Slacking grips, backing zips Let your silverware slide. I particularly liked this stanza. The rhythym an

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Whats your favourite book?

    Dead Souls]- By Nikolai Gogol [i]The Possessed - By Fyodor Dostoevsky

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Portfolios/Post Since Last Visit/Recent Lit Additions

    Jack, at least you guys got the site working at all. ^_^ kudos to you for that.

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: 42

    hilarity. ^_^

    Jul 12, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You

    ^4/10 It say 'the broken chains' in Russian

    Jul 11, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    3/10 o.O

    Jul 11, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate avatars!!!!

    6/10 bright, but boring

    Jul 11, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You

    6/10 haha, croation?

    Jul 11, 2007
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You.

    4/10 The french are dumb and deserve to get shot. if that's what you were saying, then 8/10

    Jul 11, 2007


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