ProfessorRabbit

The voices in my head were so loud they woke me. Even then they carried on, though outside my head now. This is a little awkward. Not the first part, ...

Ever since Twilight became such a big hit, all the young writers are writing about vampires. All the young writers have always been writing about vampires.

Glad to be of service. XD I'm in love with your avi, btw.

I'm not going to quote whole huge sections this time, since you don't need as many grammar fixes any more. Here goes: The opening dialogue here is very amusing, and, ...

Jorge frowned. ‘But it’s ugly. It’s strange.’ ‘Yes.’ The watch captain jingled my lead about in his hand. ‘It’s an animal.’ ‘Yes.’ ‘It’s a freak.’ ‘Yes.’ ‘And it’s

Hmm. I don't think I got across the point that I intended with the "doctor's" two lines. ^^;;; That's actually supposed to be Silas, and, if you noticed later on, ...

It should have said, "For I, now, am Thanatos." Thanks for your review! :)

Just dropping by to let you know that I got your message in my critique board, but I do not review fanfiction. Don't worry, I won't get points for this. ...

Ditto. I enjoyed the story quite a bit. :) If you want a line-by-line critique, let me know. I'm just lazy today.

That's fine, as long as it's what you intend. I just got the impression of picking up a TV series or anime mid-season and getting a synopsis at the beginning ...

Heh, I missed that chapter with the rest of the freaks in it, somehow. I was like, wait, what happened to the guy with the stutter! *facepalm* And Raven is ...

Heh, I had assumed that he was evil in the Twilight series, since he was a vampire. *rolls eyes* I need to get my butt out of the Fanfiction forum ...

I made a few changes based on clograbby's suggestions, which were well-warranted: Each time he saw her in the window across the way, he felt a fresh stir of passion, ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! For those who asked, or commented, this isn't a cliffhanger ending, don't worry. It's just that this is the only piece of this novel that's ...

Psssh, I've already seen a barcode tattoo. And I bet "Jennifer Government" is a better book, too, though I can't say for sure, having never read this one.