Primordiality

Hey there, lele! Nice poem you have here-- I really like the concept you're going for. Now, for the review. I would suggest getting rid of the couple rhymes you ...

Banned for uh... being a tiger? I don't like to get eaten. )=

I feel obligated to do this now. JESTER JESTER JESTER JESTER JESTER Okay. I'm done. Wait, no I'm not. JESTER JESTER Now I'm done.

Green. Leafy. Spazzy.

Hey there cupcake, Ethan here. So, I thought this was okay. But it could be a lot more. You kind of just have these rhymes that describe what physically happens ...

Thanks for the welcomes. =) Um, arris, I'm from the midwest kind of... not terribly fond of it, but you know how it goes. Have to live here until I ...

So, I'm Ethan... I really like to write poetry. Site seems pretty cool so far, better than the other ones I've been on, so that's cool. I'm still in high ...

Eyes like lightning, they whip us with ceramic hands And crack our bones like thunder--there was Only apathy for people like us, trying to dance And keep our footing in ...