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Hi there, This was really good. Nice vivid description, it was so interesting. Just one tiny thing that I think would make it better: 'Run,' the voice in my head ...

Hiya! Don't even know if you'll need this review now but oh well. I liked this a lot. Like the others said, simple, subtle, beautiful. You really got me into ...

Hi there! This was good. Grammar or style-wise, I didn't find anything wrong with this. But the idea seemed, boring to me. Maybe it's cause it was an assignment, maybe ...

Hi there ^.^ She was around my age and was extremely beautiful Maybe instead of saying she was extremely beautiful, you can show it. By like having him drop something, ...

Hi there, This was beautiful! It was very well-written. I didn't find anything wrong with it, grammar-wise or anything. Nice idea, and I like the unique names :) It should ...

Hey I don't know how to review poetry. At all. He sighs and turn s away, Freedom left behind. He could never break- The shackles of his mind. Otherwise it ...

Hiya, Returning the favor for "Secrets". :P I liked this, it was so sweet, so emotional. You just got everything right! I didn't notice anything wrong with it. Except this: ...

Hiya, I wish it was a little longer. Also, I thought there was a little too much telling, in these sentences: Paul Andrews was thirty – five, he didn’t date, ...

Heya I liked this. :) The idea was really interesting. And like dolwright said, nice imagery. Only, I got confused at the end too. What do you mean Unknown? I ...

Hiya I really liked this! It was so beautifully written, it flowed so well, and it was so interesting, and erm..genuine. As in, you sounded like you really meant it. ...

Hiya! This just needs a wee little improvement. The dialogue was kind of fake and cheesy, and the writing seemed a liiitle overdramatic. I agree with confetti. But I think ...

Hiya!! The plot/idea was very cute, I've never come across something like that before. I do agree with the others about the dialogue. It sounded really fake and stilted. I ...

Hi there, This was good. Quite well-written, I just have a few little nitpick things: His eyelids were half closed, and long strands of brown unshorn hair fell on the ...

Hiya! ^.^ Firstly, it needs to be broken up into paragraphs, and like borntoshop said, a new line for each speaker. Cause' right now, it's very hard to read, it's ...

Hi, I really liked this. :) It was so interesting, very well-written. That's already been pointed out ^^. Keep writing. :)