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Re: The Veil - Chapter 7
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review of your work. I am on a roll here. ;) Anyways let's begin shall we? As the buildings thinned out and became rare ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Legend of The Scale 1.1
Heya TimmyJake, pretzelsing here for a review, as I promised you. I like to always be up to date with reviews so I don't lag behind or be behind. ;) ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Cactus Leaves-- For Good (Ch. 1)
Heya Widder, pretzelsing here for a review, I really liked this first chapter and I want to be a faithful follower of your novel. Tag me or PM me every ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 6
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review as I saw that this chapter only had 5 reviews. Let's begin shall we? They all knew who she was, and most of ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 4
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for another review of this chapter(I noticed that it had many short reviews) Anyways, let's begin, shall we? Cars made her nervous. Okay,so I know that ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 2 Part 2
Heya sugar, pretzelsing here for a review. So I did read the previous 2 chapters of this novel, so I completely know what is going on.:) Let's begin, shall we? ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Kaori's Treaty~ Prolouge (REWRITE!)
Heya Firelight, pretzelsing here for a review. Just saying that you forgot to ping me a notif or send me a PM as I asked you to in the unedited ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Never quit
Heya tennis head, Pretzelsing here for a review.I really liked the morel of your sorry but I think that you could work on some things: Let's begin the review shall ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Ages: The Alter - Chapter 1 [Week of Aregallo]
Heya NoirChocolat, here is my updates review, since you redid and edited this while work. Let's begin, shall we? First if all, I was extremely confused reading this while chapter ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Ages: The Alter - Chapter 1 [Week of Aregallo]
Heya NoirChocolat, Pretzelsing here for a review, You start of with a very cliche beginning, and I almost didn't want to read on because it was so unoriginal. I think ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Where is Percy?
Heya cdog, so you requested a review from me and here I am reviewing this. Here is a jewel of advice, since you are a new member here, use your ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Away From Home
Heya mpas, pretzelsing here for a review of your short story. This story needs a lot of polishing and work but it also has a lot of potential to become ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno 6
Heya Chrissy, Pretzel here for a review as promised. Sorry for being late but I had had other reviews to write and I am sick so...(all of these excuses :D) ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Burned 1.1
Heya darling Noelle, here I am on the first *official* chapter of your story and I have a lot of letters to type ;) I usually just jump in and ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: Burned. Prologue *edited*
Heya Noelle, I saw the first chapter so I decided to write this review, darling, just because you are so special, and I also make it a rule to never ...
Mar 5, 2015