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Re: Succubus [Rated 16+ for gore and nudity]
i don't really understand it that well But i'm sure when you get started into your novel it will make much more sense. All i can say is to over ...
Jan 20, 2012 -
Re: Pure Instinct: Year One(Prologue)
I absolutely love this it's grasps the reader perfectly and holds them there till the every end. But there are a few mistakes that we can easily work on. So ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: War Rages on.
oo i like it so far it sounds quite ... depressing ... but still good and i think you should carry on and have a repetition in it like the ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: The Pain
I like the imagination that is in this short piece of writing. it leaves the reader guessing and wanting to learn more about what has happened. This is good as ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: Sneak a peak!
Hello! I would just like to say that i am a harry potter fan too! :D Anyway on with reviewing; i would just like to say that you have captured ...
Jan 15, 2012