Porcelain

[pre]Chapter One: Symbols The neon sign buzzed quietly in the early morning light. I clutched my coffee in one hand as I struggled with the keys to the shop. It ...

tehe thanks monki ^^ I dont bother much about punctuation and stuff til I'm done the grunt work lol.

Indeed ^^ I'm not terribly coordinated, and would probably cause many catastrophes if I ever got hold of a sword. Pen it is then, lol. *Is bored too* I live ...

Haha! No way, you flatter me lol. I just have a larger than normal vocabulary... And am a grammar freak. Which fails hardcore, haha. ^^; Seriously though, I loooove your ...

Hehe ^^ Aw, P has lots of :smt054 for Monki too

Realism is more effective when you want to relate to the reader. If your story has a sufficient theme or moral to it, then yes, it should connect to the ...

"Before I got High" -Afroman 8)

Squeeee ^^ This is so moving and deep!! Let me in. Let me fill this dark world with your light, Not mine. Thats the best part I figure. Much

Monki ^^ So glad to see you added more!! :D She sat upon a mighty, noble steed. She looked as though she hadn't slept for years. Her name was Katia ...

:smt005 Lol, witty ftw. One will often ask oneself if a more pointless endeavor could be conspired were the whole of history's geniuses and problem-solvers set on the task for ...

Proper amaze O_O I could never be that good.

ahaha. It looks like she has a doobie in her cigarette holder. She kinda scares me xD Like Cruella D:

Oh hello sexual inuendos. I absolutely love this piece. It makes me giddy inside. I can totally see this hitting top 40. I'd have issues with the repitition if it ...

:shock: Thats deep for gradeschool. I like it, it makes me think about so much. I find it evokes the morality in me. The rhyme-scheme fits perfectly. Loves it!

Hiiii :D Firstly let me say, I love this piece, so far. Had to leave me hangin'. :( I only have really, two issues, which pretty much seraph summed up, ...