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Re: Make a Story :)
Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Short Elf story
Hello there! Here are some statements that should be edited. "They're moving," she whispered thrashing back her long hair. * it should be period not comma. "The map has to ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Science-related essay.
Thanks for the comment! And I guess, you're right. Don't worry I accept critiques!
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Optimize and Dramatize.
Hello there, I don't know where to start. Hello, My name is Daniella [this is how 5 year old kids introduce themselves LOL]. I'm twelve years old turning thirteen this ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Mystery cases: [School's mysteries] Chapter one
Have you receive the Private message? Wait, I'll edit it again :> That was quick! Great! now, on with the review... “Okay.” Ryanne said. In addition, they started serving the ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Mystery cases: [School's mysteries] Chapter one
Yayy! My first review xP. Thanks for reviewing it, I'll surely edit the chapter and PM it to you later...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Mystery cases: [School's mysteries] Chapter one
Mystery Cases: [School’s mysteries] [The first case] chapter one: “What!” Ryanne exclaimed. “Shita** I lose the game.” Ryanne gasped as she played Mystery case puzzle at big fish games. She ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Hello
Hi Raiyelle! I'm Daniella.. Welcome to YWS. I hope you read the rules already. Let's wait for a greeter to tell you about more. Welcome! :D
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Character Drawing
Woah I envy this drawing. You are way good in drawing! The dancing person drawing is very great! You are good when it comes to sketching! But please erase the ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Science-related essay.
The Science-related essay There is much stuff that is related to Science fiction or for short Sci-Fi. Like Sci-fi movies including Star wars, Extra Terrestrial [E.T], the box-office movie; Jurassic ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Photographs Once More!
Lets see your photographs, so you're more on landmarks in different places right? It's good. You bring out the best of your photographs. But It I think your photographs is ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: How to Make a Photoshop Avvie
Good tutorial! This an easy and fast illustrated tutorial I have ever seen. You use basic tools of photoshop to make your avvie customized! Good job! hehe. 5 stars over ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Hello. I'm new here :)
To the greeters: Thank you for the warm welcome at YWS xD. :D
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Hello. I'm new here :)
Oh thanks for the helped. I made one review :)
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
My solo pic :) I was bored on that time. So I decided to capture myself.
Mar 15, 2009
