Poppi

Well I think he fails. And must re-sit. Or lunchtime detention and 500 lines.

That's fine - we all get grumpy sometimes :D

Sorry guys - missed that part of the rules! I'll rate them from now on. Thought everyone here was 13+ you didn't offend me Twinkly Person I just get REALLY ...

Is that meant to be a good comment or bad one? I didn't ask for critique on my life. Poems are words. Just read the words.

Yeah I know. I was just kidding around.

might I just ask why is it you keep saying period question-mark When you say period comma do you mean to say full-stop question-mark otherwise comma great idea exclamation-mark

mwahaha... that is what you think... until you read the poem... *rubs hands* but thanks!

The first verse is really nice but I like the second one best - adds depth "Love is living, self is dying" - do you mean self is dying because ...

"Midnight shakes the memory as a madman shakes a dead geranium" - TS Eliot - Rhapsody on a windy night Look out the window at midnight As dusty wind blows ...

Dropping them in a volcano may count as Racistial Hatred...

D+. Please re-sit.

No actually your wrong... I made an origional which was of me waving a bleeding heart and a cricket bat around in front of a mosque with loads of suidical ...

Wow didn't expect so many replies to it!! Hadn't read the lyrics yet but that stuff is >>>RANK

Brainwashing only exists up until the age of twelve in my mind. After that... you have your own life to lead. Sorry, just not much of a believer in brainwashing... ...

Teehee! No I meant look for the picture of them in the smiley-nazi tops! THAT is a sight for sore eyes... Mind you, the cute lil german dresses there ARE ...