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Re: Missing - chapter 3
Good work, but there is something different about this piece than the others. It's about time you started explaining what is going on with Ronny and stuff. I agree when ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Missing (chapter two)
This is really good! The only part that messed me up was the being shot and still being able to think and stuff. Especially if she was shot in the ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Missing
ok, I'm going to start off by saying this is really good! You've got real talent and i can't wait to read the next installment, but here's a few pointers ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Any good books I can try?
[quote="MaresAzulados"]I'm 13, and one of the authors I dislike is Meg Cabot. I just... can't read a book of hers anymore... Ya, She has a few good ones out there, ...
Jul 1, 2009 -
Re: Poisoned Needle (Death Metal)
That was really good! I could totally feel all the emotions running though me and got really into the beat! I don't even like heavy loud crazy music like that ...
Jul 1, 2009
